I Am

I Am Another You

Image: I Am Another You ~ Jeff Robinson

I am many thingsA son, a writer, a boy, a man, a friendI am all those things and I am nothingOn myself, I depend

I am a memory that will be forgottenI am a face that will fade awayI long to be rememberedBut even night must fade into day

I am a student, always learningI am a child looking at the skyI seek neither knowledge or powerJust the means to open my eyes

I am a dreamer of great dreamsI am the voice of all sorrowsI live for the simplest of thingsA laugh, your smile; gone tomorrow

I am an atheist, asking questionsI am a soldier seeking peaceI do not fear death, or darkness,I welcome its release

I am the wind howling in the treetopsI am the voice whispering in your earMy anger can be quiet and unspokenOr fill your heart with fear

I am the beggar on the street cornerI am the insect crushed beneath your feetPity me, for I am no one,A lost soul in full retreat

I am a chameleon with many facesI am a prisoner suffering on my ownI struggle silently behind my maskBut cry when I am alone

I am wise and I am stupidI am a writer lost for wordsMy past haunts my footstepsMy story is waiting to be heard

I am honest like a true friendI am jealous like the gods of oldHurt me with tears and I am forgivingBut words make my heart grow cold

I am the fire burning brightlyI am the thunder and the rainEverywhere I leave death and destructionIn my wake life grows again

I am a child born at the wrong timeI am the remnant of another ageI long for an end to violenceBut war is history’s stage

I am a walking contradictionI am everything I should not beProud; arrogant; ugly; beautifulI am me

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If you’re wondering what inspired this poem, I wanted to write something different than I had written before. I have been feeling unwell recently and I wanted to write an honest examination of life, with all of its ups and downs.

It’s about me, an exploration of who I am as a person, but it’s also about everyone. I wanted it to feel personal but also to mean something different to everyone who reads it.

I hope you enjoyed the poem and that it means something unique to you, as it does to me.~ CJ

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10 responses to “I Am”

  1. MusEditions Avatar
    MusEditions

    Ah, cj, I find this poem devastating; but then I find much of your poetry devastating. Although some of your others have been quite personal, this has a very different feel. It speaks to me of longing, frustration, and hope.It tells me that you—and I—wonder, often; constantly where we fit into this life-thing.Your seventh stanza particularly did me in—oh, cj!—and the mask, and the remnant, and the walking contradiction; all such evocative word prints.Your reading was heartfelt; professional. In the two years I’ve known you, this is the first time I’ve heard your voice. It sounded different than I would have imagined, but then they always do. Your voice is magnificent, really—have you done readings in public before? Please consider this encouragement to do more of them.

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  2. cjwriter Avatar
    cjwriter

    Thanks, Muse. I’m glad you liked the poem. As you can imagine, it was a very personal thing to write but I actually found it quite easy to write at the same time. It came very organically and that was something I wanted to preserve in the poem, the feeling that these were my innermost thoughts pouring out and I wasn’t interfering with the flow.It’s interesting that you found it to be quite a wistful poem. I agree; it is very much about longing, and loneliness, and pain… but that’s what life is about when you think about it, isn’t it? Life is a journey of moments and experiences, of hope and desperation and love and loss and joy, and what I wanted to convey was that they’re all parts of who I am and I wouldn’t want to change them even if I had the chance. Sometimes I disappoint myself; sometimes I wish things could be different; but in the end I know that if I changed anything, I wouldn’t be me. So it’s a kind of an affirmation as well; sad but hopeful.Looking back I think a lot of the inspiration for my work comes from the feeling that I’ve always been something of an outsider; an observer; someone older than his years. It’s not something I dwell on; I’m actually quite proud of it, the idea that I don’t conform and am my own person. To be creative I think you have to be able to look at the world a little differently anyway, so it’s probably a natural feeling. But there are still times when we don’t quite know where we fit into our lives. I guess that’s what I’ve been exploring as well.I’m glad you liked my reading! It’s interesting hearing someone’s voice for the first time, isn’t it? We always sound a little different than we expect but it also helps to complete the image we have of someone in our minds, to make them more real. I’m glad you liked my voice as well. I’ll have to say G’Day next time in my best Aussie accent. :)I have done some readings before, although nothing professional; I used to run a writers group and read some of my poetry there. I enjoyed it, so I might do more in the future; we’ll see. I think I’ll record the rest of my poetry over the next few weeks as well and post it online; it really helps to make it come alive.Thank you for your kind words and thoughts, as always. ;)

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  3. Maribeth Avatar
    Maribeth

    I loved this poem. It was very raw and emotional. The atheist part though:(. Maybe one day when you are looking up at the sky with those child eyes, you will discover that he really does exist. Life is short for sure, but all of the mysteries that surround it is what truly makes it beautiful. Look for the signs and they will appear. You have a beautiful gift, I have to believe that someone gave that to you for a purpose!Beautiful PoemLove,Maribeth

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  4. Maribeth Avatar
    Maribeth

    I have a poem that I wrote a while back that reminds me of this. It is on my blog. I will have to find it and show you it.

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  5. cjwriter Avatar
    cjwriter

    Maribeth – thank you, I’m glad you liked the poem. I think it’s probably the most intimate poem I’ve written, the one which says the most about me and who I am as a person. Finding that balance between raw emotion and the stylistic flow was interesting… to make sure it felt natural was difficult but the writing itself felt quite easy. It was a rewarding mix.As far as the atheist bit goes, I should probably explain more. I am an atheist but I’m not militant about it or anything. I was brought up as a Christian by my parents and those values still inform my life today. I just found that as I got older I became less and less connected with any religion, until I just drifted away.It was a gradual process and there are still things I believe in but I feel that science helps to explain them. It may happen later that I feel myself drawn towards something else or have an experience that awakens something in me; but right now I feel content.The reference to atheism in the poem isn’t really meant to be about atheism itself; it’s more about my feelings about death, about facing my mortality and finding peace with it. I guess I just decided that all I can do is try and live a good life and if it turns out that I’m wrong later then I hope that would count for something.Is your poem still on your blog? I’d love to see it. And thank you for your kind words. ;)

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  6. Libby Avatar
    Libby

    I love this. Magikquilter sent me the link. Very nice. I’ll be back…

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  7. cjwriter Avatar
    cjwriter

    Hi Libby – thanks for stopping by!I’m glad you liked the poem and thank you for the lovely compliment; I’ll have to thank MQ for sending you the link. Take care.

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  8. thebeadden Avatar
    thebeadden

    Oh CJ! That just took my breath away. I don’t even know how to describe what it felt like to read it. I think many people could relate to this, but never have said it so well.You know you’ve read something good when you get goosebumps!And your accent! I love an Australian accent. So nice to hear your voice. Thanks for sharing with us and do take care.I think about you and your family quite often and hope all is well.

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  9. cjwriter Avatar
    cjwriter

    BD – thank you, I’m so glad you enjoyed the poem. I think it’s probably my most accessible poem and I really wanted it to feel like it was about me but could mean something different to everyone who read it… that it could be harsh but honest, a real examination of life. I hope that’s what people take from it, that they can see something of themselves in it too.One of my favourite songs is Radiohead’s Creep. I love how raw it is, how Thom Yorke pours everything into the song. That’s the kind of feel I wanted this poem to have as well and that’s one of the reasons why I wanted to record it. Listening to poetry can add a whole other dimension to a poem and it worked really well for I Am.I’m glad you liked my accent! I have friends overseas who’ve been a bit shocked when they’ve first heard my voice. It’s funny because over here I actually don’t sound that Australian; my accent isn’t that strong compared to others. People keep asking if I’m English!I’m feeling a little better now; just needed some time to myself. I hope things have started to improve for your family as well; we’ve been thinking of you and wishing you the best.Thank you for you kind words, and many blessings. ;)

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  10. praalk Avatar
    praalk

    :) I like your words, the way they come together and what they mean….Best wishes….. :)Praalk

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